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Cerita ciptaan ku (fanz-fic)...di ubah/di gubal semula oleh NORALIMAH KHAIRINA .karya asal drpd AIMUNAH BINTI SHAARI.

CAST:- G-DRAGON  as JI YONG
          - DARA as DARA
          - MINZY as MINGKI
          - T.O.P as SEUNG HYUN
          - CL as CHAE LIN
          - BOM as MISS BOM
          - TAEYANG as SIR YOUNG BAE
          - D-LITE as DOCTOR DAE SUNG
          - V.I as SEUNG RI (adk JI YONG)
   

    DARA (DAX NI RMBUT DIE SHAVE SBLAH) pelajar baru di YG HIGH SCHOOL. Dulu die belajar di sebuah universiti di MNCHESTER. Setelah dipujuk oleh adiknya MINGKI (PENGERUSI KLB TARIAN BOYISH) untuk bersekolah di situ, dia pun bersetuju. MINGKI, adik kepada DARA seorang pelajar pintar di sekolahnya. Ini membolehkan dia belajar satu kelas dengan kakaknya.

     Di kelas 3/15 A.
Ketika guru sedang mengajar di dalam kelas, MINGKI mengetuk pintu sebelum masuk. "MINGKI, why are you late today?"  "I am sorry  MISS BOM (CKGU PLING CUN DLM SK). Today my sis from MANCHESTER will be here. inthe same class w/ us."  MINGKI menarik tangan kakaknya yg trsenyum riang.

   "Annyoeng haseyo. Jeunun DARA imnida."  Dia brkata dngn nada yg riang. "Okay DARA, your seat is beside JI YONG(DAX YG SLALU KENE DNDE NGN PENGAWAS WALAUPUN DIE NI ANTARA PLAJAR TRBAIK DLM SK)."  MISS BOM menundingkn jarinye ke arah seorg peljr lelaki brmbut merah terang (merh thn baru cina). DARA mlangkh ke arh meja kosong itu. MINGKI plak mlngkah ke arh mejanye di sbelah SEUNG HYUN (SI BUDK BRMBUT BIRU).

    Setelh slsai klas brsama MISS BOM, loceng mnndakn wktu rhat brbunyi. DARA melhat plajar di sblahnye dngn plik. Tiba2x MINGKI mnarik tangn DARA. "DARA ppali (hurry)!  I'm hungry!"  die mnarik tngn DARA skali agi dn mreka brlari ke arh cafe.

   JI YONG dan SEUNG HYUN msih agi brada d dlm kls, SEUNG HYUN menyapa JI YONG dngn senyumn. "Hey, the girl next to you nice right?"  SEUNG HYUN brtanya kpd JI YONG yg msih x habs2x agi kmas brng (bag). "I don't know cuz she's not my taste." JI YONG mnjwb lalu trus prge k arh cafe. D dlm hati nya die sngt ingin brknaln dngn DARA.

  Slepas reht mrk smua msuk k kls smula untkmeneruskn pmblajarn iaitu fizik. Guru mrk SIR YOUNG BAE (CKGU PLING COOL DLM SEK) mgarhkn mrk untk mlakukn krja scara brkumpuln iaitu brsama kwn yg duk sblah mrk. "Annyeong, I'm DARA." DARA memulakn prbualn stlah hmpir 2 mnit keadaan sepi, "JI YONG."  Dia mnjwb dngn nada yg mndatar.mnanyakn MINGKI sape sbnarnye JI YONG 2. Die trlalu nk tau tntang laki2x itu ngn mndlm. "MINGKI, how is JI YONG acting like? Did he always be serius everytime?"  "Actually, he's happy and make everyone cheer. But lately he alway be like that. Everyone feels weird."  Dia mngnkat kedua2x blah bahu nyer.

    Keeskn hari nya. DARA mengmbil tmptnya d sblah JI YONG dan MINGKI plak ambk tmpt die kat sblah SEUNG HYUN. MINGKI kelihat gmbira rbual dngn SEUNG HYUN. DARA pula try nk brbual ngn JI YONG. "JI YONG since we just know each other, can you tell me about yourself?"  "Nothing to know 'bout me."  "What if I say I love you?"  JI YONG trsnyum sinis ke arh DARA. "I'll say that I hate you. Don't disturb me."  Diam menepis tngn DARA yg sdng mmgang tngn nye.

    Sjak hari itu, DARA trus mngganggu JI YONG. Aty nya nak sngt mngenali aty budi dax laki 2.  X kira brape kali JI YONG try nk halau die, die ttap ade kat mane je JI YONG ade.  MINGKI rase ade yg x kene dngn kakak nyer 2. Die slalu x luang kn mase brsama ngn MINGKI ktika wktu rhat. Oleh itu, dia mntk prtolongn dari SEUNG HYUN untk menyelidk mengenai kakak nye.

    "SEUNG HYUN please help me. I think that my sis have something wrong."  Dia menggoncng tngn SEUNG HYUN. "Ok, I'll help you."  Dia brstuju untk menolong MINGKI.
    
     Pada wktu rhat itu, mrk brdua prgi mngekori DARA drpd blakng. Alngkh trkjutnya MINGKI apabila mlhat kakak nye brjln brsama JI YONG y cube nk tolk DARA smapi jtuh. Tapi DARA ttap trus mngekori JI YONG. Mereka brdua sling brpndngn ttpi SEUNG HYUN rase yg ad yg x kene dngn JI YONG & DARA.

     "DARA I'll see you at the garden after school?"  JI YONG brkata. "Ok." DARA trsnyum grang.

     Ssmpainye DARA d sana, dia trlhat JI YONG brsame seorg prmpuan. Hati DARA mnjadi skit apabila JI YONG mncium dahi prmpuan itu. DARA mnghmpiri mrk. "You don't have to say anything . I just want to introduce you w/ some one this is my lover CHAE LIN(BUDK YG AGK HOT DKT SK MAYBE SBB MATE DIE YG NMPK CM MATA KUCING 2 KUT)."  DARA brlari kluar dari tmn itu smbil mnangis tresak-esk. Smnjak hari 2, DARA x lagi brtemu dngn JI YONG. Dia tlah mnukr kls. Stlah hmpir 2 bln x brtemu dngn JI YONG seorg prmpuan menemuainya. Dia meningati prmpuan itu.

       "Annyeong, DARA." Dia brtanya kpd DARA. DARA hanya mengangguk. "I'm CHAE LIN. I know you know me. There's something that I want tell you."  Dia klihatn serius. "What's the matter?"  DARA brtanya kpd CHAE LIN.

        "I'ts 'bout JIYONG oppa! He have been like crazy guy after telling you 'bout me. Actually, I'm his cousin..."  CHAE LIN mula menangis. "What he told  you 'bout me is fake, cuz he don't wat to make you sad. JI YONG oppa sick. He suffer  BRAIN CANSER."  CHAE LIN bersmbung lagi.

       "What?!? Are you try to kidding me?!?!?"  Soal  DARA. "No. I'm not kidding you." Jwb CHAE LIN. "Huh?" DARA begitu trkjut mndngr apa yg CHAE LIN katakn. "He's critical now in the hospital. The doctor said that he doesn't have long time to stay in with us. You understand right what I'm talking 'bout. I came here uz he realy wants to meet you."  "Ok, I'll meet him. Just stay for a second. I need to change my clothes! Wait for me, please bring me to the hospital to see him."  tiba2x handphone CHAE LIN brdering. DARA sngt risau jadi die brtanya kpd CHAE LIN "Who's that?"  "Hmm.. I'ts JI YONG brother's SEUNG RI(DAX PLING NAKAL DLM SK SLALU KNE PANGGIL MASUKBLIK DISISPLIN)." CHAE LIN mengangkat pnggilan itu. "Yeobseyo, yes it's me CHAE LIN talking. Why SEUNG RI?" Tanya CHAE LIN smntara itu DARA sdng mnyaln pakaian nya d dlm bilik. "What!?!??!?!?" Tiba2x sahaje CHAE LIN trjrit.. Jeritn nye mnndakn yg die tramat lh cemas. "What?! DOC (DOC PLING COOL & TALENTED AT HOSPITAL MAYBE SBB GAYE DIE YG LNGSUNG X NMPK MCM DOC) said that his condition now really really critical!?!?"  "Oh no.."   "Yes, I'll be there in a second please wait foe me, SEUNG RI." DARA yg brada d dlm bilik segera keluar dn menuju k hospitl dnn menaiki kreta yg d pndu oleh CHAE LIN.
       
        Setiba nye d hosptal mereka menuju k arh blik d mana JI YONG d rawat klihatn SEUNG RI sdng menunggu d luar blik dngn pnuh rase cmas. "What the doctor said?" soal CHAE LIN. "The DOC said that every 1 hour he will come to hyung room to check him."  Jwb SEUNG RI. "You're DARA. Am I right?"  Tanya SEUNG RI. DARA yg sdng menangis pun mnjwb "Yes I am."  

      Sebaik saje DOC kluar dari blik JI YONG, DARA trus brtanya kpd DOC itu tntng keadaan JI YONG. DOKTOR itu hanya menggelengkan kepalanya seraya brkata "The only way to save him is do an operation. But it's too dangerous. He maybe die during the operation or he could blind."  SEUNG RI trgamam mndngr kata2x DOC itu manakala CHAE LIN hanya brdiri tnpa snarang reaksi DARA pula trus trduduk. Tiba2x sahaja air mata nya mengalir tnpa hnti..rase sbak di dadanya sudh x mmpu d thnye lagi.

     Selepas DOC bredar DARA trus meluru masuk k dlm bilik rawatan JI YONG. Betapa sbak nye DARA apabila melihat JI YONG yg trbaring pucat lesi di ats katil nya. Apa yg lbih membuat kan die sedih adalah apabila melihat trdpt bnyak wayar yg dipasang di tubuh JI YONG. DARA menangis teresak d sebelah JI YONG. "Why you don't tell her 'bout this?"  Ucap CHAE LIN yg cuba menenangkn DARA.
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     Tiba2x JI YONG membuka matanya. "Hey...Stop crying. I don't like to see you like this." Dia menenangkan DARA. Suaranya hanya sayup2x kedengaran d gegendang telingan mereka yg brada d dlm blik itu. Mungkin krana alat prnafasan yg di psng padanya mmbuat suaranya kurng jelas. "I want to show you some thing."  Smbung nye lagi. "Hey, stop it. Please don't talk to much you are sick." Ucap DARA.  'Nevermind I'm okay."  tnpa mrk sedari JI YONG membuk alat pernafasan nya. SEUNG RI yg prasan akn prbuatan abg nya itu menegur "Hey don't open it."  Namun kata2x nya itu lngsung x di hiraukan oleh  JI YONG. DARA yg bru perasan  JI YONG tngh bukak bnde alh tu cpt 2x p psngkn blik.
   
         Tiba2x dengr pintu di ketuk rupanya SEUNG HYUN & MINGKI yg ketuk pintu 2. Pas 2 DOC (yg check JI YONG) msuk blik JI YONG. Kebetuln mase tu JI YONG dh trtido... Doc tu pun tanya SEUNGRI "So dongsaeng what's your.... Hmm you know what.."  "I don't know. I don't know what to do if he not do the operation maybe he will die, if he do the operation maybe he'll die during the operation or maybe he'll blind. I don't want he see die but I also don't want to see he blind. It's hard to choose between operation or not."  Tiba2x sahaja MINGKI menyampuk "You know each other."  Pntas aje SEUNGRI & DOC 2 jwb "Ofcourse. This DOC is my cousin. His name is DAESUNG."  doc tu plak just senyum jer.

       Makanya mlm 2 semua brkmpung sbb nk jaga JI YONG at situ. Tapi tibe2x je mase semua org ngh duk sdp trtidur JI YONG punya nadi tibe2x jer dari 170 turun smpai 55. Bnde alh (mesen) 2 ape lagi bunyi lh bip bip bip. DARA yg duk show tidur sebelah JI YONG pun trsedr... Cpt2x die p panggil DOC DAE SUNG. DOC DAE SUNG pun brgegas p at blik JI YONG... Yg len cpt2x keluar bb just DOC & nurse je yg bleh ade at dlm 2... Bila DOC DAESUNG keluar semua cpt2x p tanya DOC psl keadaan JI YONG... pas 2 DOC kata JI yong nak jumpe seorg drpd die org semua. Dn org yg die nk jumpe 2 ade lh DARA. then GD bukak alat pernafasan 2 and keluarkan cincin bertatahkan berlian yg ade dlm poket baju die smbil berbisik "Do you want to be my girlfriend?"  "What at this time you say like that." Tibe2x yg len msuk then jerit suprise. DARAape lagi start naik angin lh trus die tngking JI YONG "How can you make love announcement here in the hospital."   "What if it is your father hospital."  DARA tercengang.  "So accept me or reject me."   "You're so not ROMANTIC but I do when it's comes you."  JI YONG pun menyarungkn cincin 2  di jari DARA seraya berbisik "SARANGHAEYO MY BEAUTIFUL HANGOVER."

     

    



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